1st Continuity Assessment

Hair and Makeup Assessment - Continuity

Here are the images from my first assessment which I feel went quite well. If I was to improve this or could change anything I would ensure that there are no random straight hair which happened with the hairstyle I created as now I have to recreate this again for my second continuity assessment.
Also feel that I made things harder for myself by adding the tears as it was hard enough catching it falling down the face while taken the pictures the first time and now I have to attempt to recreate what happened by chance.

Products used;
Illamasqua Satin Primer
Complexion rescue by Bare Minerals
Kryolan Concealer palette
Illamasqua Loose Powder
Illamasqua Sculpt Duo
Red from the Supra Colour Kryolan palette mixed with moisturiser
Rimmel liner 'Red Dynamite
Maybelline 'Lash Sensational'
Glycerine